Ken McCreless

The Amulet- part IV



Posted: Monday, May 04, 2009

by Ken McCreless
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He looked around as if there might be someone who could help him, but of course there was only her, and she was sobbing so much she could do nothing else. Although the pain was slow to build, it would reach heights and intensity the likes of which he would never have imagined possible.

Then his limp, near lifeless hand began to shake, as did his entire body, along with hers. Both had the same thought at the exact same time- earthquake. She was stunned that her Nirvana could suffer such earth-like evils, but there it was.

She managed to get up and even helped him to his feet just in time to avoid a boulder that had been dislodged from its resting place a few dozen yards away. It was large enough and moving fast enough to take out the enormous oak tree he had been resting under, exploding it as if it had been packed with C4. They watched it until it vanished, absorbed into nothingness as if it were a soap bubble.

Standing in their now still and silent world the pair held onto each other and scanned the terrain, looking for whatever may be next, whatever it was that would not let them relax.

Everything, with the exception of the boulder and tree, was just as it has always been. Then, in a matter of several seconds, the missing items were back. Without the slightest sound or tremor both the tree and the boulder had been restored, coming into being as if they were in a cameras viewfinder being focused.

The silence was disturbed only by the resonance of their beating hearts, their breathing too shallow to register. For several minutes they simply held each other, fighting against that growing sense of despair. She reached over to examine his hand, thinking hard on the ways of first aid.

Then, as if to stop her from easing his pain, they heard it, turning their faces in unison to see who or what it was that emitted the low, guttural, deliberate laugh. It not only stole the warmth from their blood, it also reverberated throughout, revealing the proportions of their terrain by bouncing off invisible ramparts in shimmering waves.

Then they saw it, the source itself.

Hilarity oozed from the boulder, chuckling like a bully that had trapped his latest victim in a broom closet in junior high. Hundreds of small clefts and ridges in the giant stone began to change shape, evolving to circles, then ovals, and every thing between. After a moment or two the gyrations escalated into convulsions. The rock formed ears, a nose, a forehead, a disheveled hairstyle, and eyes; the details filling in rapidly. There was even beard stubble like snippets of cable TV wire and, scattered here and there, pimples the size of dinner plates.

Then all was dark.

Laughter, laughter, laughter, rising and falling, was moving around in the darkness of its own accord without any particular path. He thought the boulder had to be flying, but discovered it had not moved when it began to glow in crimson.

Silence, even their hearts failing to beat, as the murderer spoke.

"Where have you been, my friend?

Ken McCreless is just a guy who loves to write, and was born to do so. He is a freelance writer with several projects ongoing, including books and magazines. A huge fan of both irony and history, Ken has dedicated his life and his writing to serve the Lord Jesus Christ.

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Top-level comments on this article: (6 total)
» left by Connor Davidson
3 years 21 days ago.
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Great story. Well done.
 
A continuation of a great plot.
» left by Ken McCreless 3 years 20 days ago.
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Thank you, Connor.
» left by Nila Smith
3 years 20 days ago.
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Okay, I was sitting here with wide eyes and breath held waiting to see what the boulder was going to do.  I expected it to start chasing after them, as 'he" was the true target not the tree!
 
You're very good at keeping your audience.  Now, I want the next segment, and I do mean NOW!!
 
Thanks for such a good read!!!
N
» left by Ken McCreless 3 years 20 days ago.
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Thank you so much, "N." Your kind words go a long way!!!
» left by Teresa Ortiz
3 years 19 days ago.
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Kenny my Bro - you are killin' me! :-) Looking forward to more!! No pressure :-)
 
Excellent writing! Sis
» left by Ken McCreless 3 years 18 days ago.
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Thank you, Sister T!!
 
I am having such a good time writing it, I may never stop!
» left by Michael Ramzy 3 years 18 days ago.
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Wow! This is worth waiting for, Ken. Every part is raising the stakes, and I am truly glad you enjoy writing this because it shows. Well done!
» left by Ken McCreless 3 years 17 days ago.
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Thanks, Michael, I really appreciate it.
» left by Susan Thom
3 years 15 days ago.
179 fans.
hi ken,
 
okay, first the harley, and then, the novel?
 
pretty good!
 
i hope you remember i reserve one of the first copies, signed and kept as a positive part of this life.
 
my best regards,
 
sue
» left by Ken McCreless 3 years 15 days ago.
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Your signed book is top priority, Sue. Thank you so much for the support ...
» left by David Pekrul
3 years 9 days ago.
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You've now got us all hooked. We'll keep reading.
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